The following is an example of a good performance review:
What did you accomplish this quarter and how do you think the quarter went overall?
I witnessed ________ improve our ability to be RELIABLE and DEDICATED in the eyes of our clients by improving our communication and delivery of work. I saw ________ PROACTIVELY set up several meetings to get a better understanding of the business objectives and I saw them distribute effective meeting minutes to all of our team members. ______ also followed up regularly to ensure that everyone was on the same page. Through these efforts, ______ instilled a sense of confidence both internally and externally since they joined.
This performance review meets expectations because it draws a thoughtful conclusion with respect to the question and offers examples to back up the claims.